RTW: Danke mein Freund

In order to fit today’s Road Trip Wednesday with the A-to-Z Blogging Challenge, I’ve had to resort to one of the few German phrases I know. Call me a cheater, but the rules don’t say the words have to be English! Anyway, today’s Road Trip Wednesday question posed by the lovely ladies at YA Highway is: Who has helped you on your reading/writing/publishing journey? This is an opportunity to tell them “Thanks!” Or, as they say in Germany, “Danke!”

There are many people I could choose to say thanks to, including my wife, my blog friends, my beta readers, and even literary agent Janet Reid (getting singled out in her writing contests is a huge encouragement). But I want to take a slightly different direction for this challenge, and pay tribute to someone who encouraged my literary creativity  at a very early and important stage in my life.

Mr. Jim Cobbett was one of the best teachers I ever had at school. He was my teacher in my 5th and 7th years at Marlbrook County Primary School (ages 8-9 and 10-11), and more than any teacher I had at any of the schools I’ve been to, he took notice of, and took seriously, my writing. As a teacher generally, he was amazing. He did things like teach punctuation by writing a paragraph on the blackboard (it was the late 70s) and have us use percussion instruments to indicate the punctuation while someone read the text. On another occasion, he had us make characters out of the letters of the alphabet and then draw comic strip stories based on our alphabet character. Another time, he had us listen to the Monty Python “Spam” sketch and perform it for the rest of the school during Assembly one morning. And then there was the time when, as part of the lead-up to our class trip to the Isle of Wight, he played us “Ticket to Ride” by the Beatles and challenged us to re-write the lyric to celebrate the town of Ryde on the Isle of Wight. You get the idea? He knew how to teach kids and make it fun. He was our teacher and advocate. We really felt like he cared about us.

But specifically, as it pertains to my writing, one time he had us write plays, and I came up with this detective story called The Disprin Murders. I don’t remember the details, but it involved a man called Mr. Headache who reports murders to the police. In the end, it turns out Mr. Headache is the murderer (“Disprin” is (or was) a popular brand of headache medicine in the UK). Mr. Cobbett was impressed enough that he had the class actually “perform” the play. He assigned parts, we got into costume, and he took pictures of us posing for various scenes. We then recorded the script on a tape recorder, and he made a slide show of the play combining the audio with the pictures. I could tell a lot more stories like this, but suffice to say, for as long as he was my teacher, he treated me as his go-to person for creative story ideas like that, which of course for a young child is incredibly affirming.

So, thank you, Mr. Cobbett. If and when my first novel is published, you can be sure your name will be in the acknowledgements. I’m sure he’ll be surprised it’s taken me this long to finally get something in print!

Now it’s your turn. If you’re a writer, is there someone you want to thank for encouraging you on your creative journey? Even if you’re not a writer, is there someone who has supported you more than anyone else as you pursue a life’s ambition or goal?

cds

Colin D. Smith, writer of blogs and fiction of various sizes.

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37 Responses

  1. Miss Cole says:

    It’s amazing what a teacher can inspire. A couple of my senior school English teachers will be thanked, as will my year six teacher who told me he looked forward to seeing my name in print one day.

    • cds says:

      There’s nothing like a teacher who loves his/her job and knows how to do it. Being invested in those you teach, desiring to see them achieve and do well, I think is fundamental. I’m glad you’ve experienced this too. 🙂

  2. Elodie says:

    Awww! I love this post! Teachers can have such a wonderful impact…At least 4 of mine really sticked ot my mind and encouraged me in such a manner that I am forever grateful to them!

    • cds says:

      Thanks, Elodie! If only all teachers understood how much influence they can have in the lives of those they teach, especially young children. I remember watching the movie “Mr. Holland’s Opus” and thinking, if Mr. Cobbett had been a high school teacher in the US, that’s the kind of teacher he would have been: one who dedicates himself to his students, and earns their love and respect.

  3. Jaime says:

    That’s awesome, Colin 🙂 And that play sounds pretty interesting too! I’m not sure that any of my teachers encouraged me to write, which is probably why it took me as long as it did to get around to taking the plunge. My memories are riddled with essays and the like and not much in the way of creative writing/fiction writing. Oh wait, there was one teacher who selected me to go to a young writer’s conference way back in the day. I suppose that was a really good thing at the time.

    Right now, I’d have to say that my husband, my sister, and my parents are probably the most encouraging and enabling in this endeavour (in that exact order). My hubby, as always, is my greatest cheerleader 🙂

    • cds says:

      Thanks, Jaime! I wish I still had a copy of that play somewhere. I can only hope that in some dark closet somewhere, Mr. Cobbett still has the tape of it. 🙂 As I think about it, this was a very creative period of my life. I was constantly writing stories and comic strips, and I was also working on my magnum opus “kings and queens” book that I mentioned in a Friday Fives one time last year. And Mr. Cobbett takes a lot of credit for stoking the fires. 🙂

      I can’t imagine how any writer perseveres, at least in the initial stages of trying to get that first novel published, without the support of family, and especially one’s spouse. Yay for Jaime’s hubby! 🙂

  4. Sarah says:

    Aww, this is SUCH a great story Colin! It’s so fantastic to hear about teachers who go the extra mile to make their students feel special, and inspire them through the rest of their lives. What a wonderful tribute to him!

    • cds says:

      Thank you Sarah! I do hope to get the chance to meet him again so I can thank him in person. Especially if I have a successful novel that I can give to him (signed, of course), and that he can show his students (assuming he’s still teaching) and inspire them with the story of how he encouraged this child a long time ago… 🙂

      Oh, and congratulations on your recent Swedish fame! It’s an honor to have a celebrity commenting on my blog. Do you think you can get me ABBA’s autographs? 😉 Seriously, you did a fantastic job with that interview.

  5. What a great post! I fear that in the haze of pressure and test scores, it’s easy for teachers to forget that this is what teaching is all about: making an impact on someone’s life forever. My freshman English teacher was the one for me.

    • cds says:

      Thanks, Laurie. I’m sure that’s the case, which is why we need to be sure to credit and thank those who have had an impact on our lives. I’m sure they would continue to do their jobs without the praise, but I know the praise and thanks reminds them of the bigger picture of what they do, and the influence they have.

  6. What an amazing tribute! I wish I would have had a Mr. Cobbett as my English teacher! And it just speaks to the profession as to the impact teachers can have when I read posts like this. 🙂

    And, uh…thanks for the “D” idea for today.

    • cds says:

      Thanks! I wish I’d had a lot more Mr. Cobbetts, but unfortunately I had my fair share of the opposite too during my school career. Teachers have an amazing impact on kids, and I say this as a homeschooler, because that applies both in the regular school system, and at home.

      I’m honored you liked the “D” idea enough to use it too, Alison! 🙂

  7. Daisy Carter says:

    He sounds like an amazing teacher! I had a couple of those, though none were so creative. But a few years ago, I ran into my favorite hs English teacher, and she not only remembered me but remembered my writing. I was shocked and deeply moved that a teacher I’d so long adored thought well enough of me to remember me!

    Good teachers, truly, are heroes.

    Great post!

    • cds says:

      That’s wonderful, Daisy! What an encouragement for you. I would like to think Mr. Cobbett still remembers me…

      Thanks! 🙂

  8. Robin Moran says:

    How awesome was your teacher?! There was a teacher in year 8 who was quite encouraging. She asked to read a couple of things I wrote and told me I should consider writing as a career when I was older. It’s nice to hear a teacher say you have the potential in whatever career you fancy doing. Makes you feel like you can actually do it and achieve your goals.

  9. E.Maree says:

    Your teacher sounds fantastic! I wouldn’t have gotten anywhere without the support of my teachers. 🙂

    • cds says:

      He was. And I think it’s testimony to how good he was that I would have said the same thing about him back then as I do now. Often we only appreciate how great a teacher was years after we left school. I remember, back in my last of primary school, we had a different teacher for the first term. Then we were told that after Christmas, Mr. Cobbett would be moving up to teach our class the rest of the year. I was *so* excited. I had some good teachers after Mr. Cobbett, but any time after age 11 if you’d asked me who my favorite teacher is/was, I’d have given this same answer. 🙂

  10. Wow. What an amazing teacher and great story!

  11. Aww, I love your take on this, Colin. I imagine Mr. Cobbett would be thrilled to know that he made such an impact. What a heart-warming post!

    • cds says:

      Thanks, Katy. I hope he stumbles across this article someday. Even better, that I might meet up with him and tell him face-to-face. 🙂

  12. Amy Renske says:

    I really enjoyed your response, Colin. What a great age to have such an inspirational teacher in your life! I think it’s awesome that you chose to pay tribute to Mr. Cobbett. I always wonder if teachers realize what a difference they can make. I have a son with special needs, and in second grade he had this wonderfully sweet teacher. She cast my son as President Lincoln in the class play–something we would not have ever expected. Frankly, we were concerned it might end in disaster. But somehow this teacher created an incredibly supportive environment for him in that classroom.

    When it came time for the performance, my son lost his hat towards the end. It fell right off his head and into the audience, and everyone laughed. I could see that he was close to falling apart (these types of unexpected things are difficult for him to handle), when the little girl to the left of him reached out and grabbed his hand. It was the most touching thing I had ever seen. She knew he needed a little support, and she reached out to him.

    We’ve had some not-so-great school experiences with my son in the last couple months. Thank you, Colin, for reminding me of the positive ones, and for inspiring me to write for just a few minutes today.

    • cds says:

      Thank you for sharing that lovely story, Amy. I hope your son has far more great experiences at school like the one you shared. It certainly blesses me to know that I’ve helped bring to mind some good memories for you. 🙂

  13. Carissa says:

    Such fun stories! What a fantastic teacher! Thanks for sharing, and thanks for stopping by!

  14. Rachael says:

    What a great teacher, reminds me of my Year 6 teacher, Mrs Woods – she was fab! Great post!

  15. Amy Cobbett says:

    Hello my name is Amy and I am Mr Cobbetts daughter…I noticed you hadn’t left a reply for a while so not sure if this is still active! Let me know x

    • cds says:

      Wow! Thank you for commenting, Amy! Yes, the blog is still active. This is a nice surprise. Clearly your dad meant a lot to me as a young child, and I’ll always be grateful for the encouragement he gave my (over-) active imagination. 🙂 How is he doing? The last I heard he was a school inspector, or something along those lines–but that was years ago. Feel free to contact me directly if you prefer. My e-mail address is on my “About” page.

  16. John Cobbett says:

    Hi. My name is John and I was Jim’s elder brother. Amy has made me aware of your posting. My brother died suddenly in March of this year and his loss was felt by a lot of people, many colleagues and former pupils, so thank you for posting this tribute to his teaching skills. It is heart warming to know that somewhere in this World a memory of him lingers on. Thank you.

    • cds says:

      Thank you for letting me know this deeply sad news, John. You can be sure that I will never forget Jim Cobbett, and the impact he had on me. He truly was a gifted teacher. It’s a shame he never got to read my tribute in person, and I wish I could have seen him just one more time to thank him for the time he took with me (and all of his pupils). I honestly believe he saw his job as more than just teaching reading and writing, but as developing young minds to reach their potential. My most heartfelt condolences to you and the family–I’m sure the loss, as great as it is for those of us privileged to have been taught by him, is much greater for you.

      Thank you again for commenting.

  17. Beth Frank nee Cobbett says:

    Hi Colin, I’m Jim’s other daughter Beth and I wanted to thank you for posting these memories of our lovely dad. Education was always a passion in our home emanating from both our dad and mum. All three of us kids were lucky enough to hear them speak about, and also witness first-hand, their love and commitment to teaching. Their creativity and “out of the box” style may have completely laid bare to our plastic dinosaur collections as kids, or led to hour long walks to collect teaching resources during family holidays, but it certainly showed us that good teachers do whatever it takes to facilitate learning. I personally have to thank my parents for sharing their passion with me. All that they instilled in me over the years keeps my own teaching fire well and truly lit as I teach 3rd Grade in a very challenging school in Dallas, TX. My dad was an amazing dad and I hope that through those he taught, and in my own small way my own teaching career, his legacy will continue.

    • cds says:

      Thank you for your comment Beth. It is truly a pleasure to share (and refresh) my memories of your dad during what was certainly the time I remember best at Marlbrook. Indeed, I was sharing the sad news with my mum this past weekend. She was a cleaner and dinner lady at Marlbrook for over 20 years, and she remembers (with fondness) that his classroom was always the messiest! I’m so pleased to hear that you (and your sister) have gone on to teach–following in his footsteps. I’m sure through you, and those of us whose lives he touched, his legacy will continue. He will certainly never be forgotten.

      • Beth Frank nee Cobbett says:

        Ahh, so the messy classroom is something else I should thank my dad for. I definitely inherited that one!

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